连接词告诉读者两个想法之间的关系:一个导致另一个,一个与另一个形成对比,或者一个补充另一个。选错连接词,拼写全对,意思也可能整个反过来。
这一课建立在纠正主谓一致之上,同属用语法把意思说清楚,也与文章与评论中的段落构建紧密相关。
怎么选对连接词?
先判断关系是什么,再选合适的词,并检查它周围的语法。
| 关系 | 连接词 | 句型 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 原因 | because, since | 主句 + because + 从句 | We moved inside because it rained. |
| 结果 | so, therefore | 从句, so + 从句 | It rained, so we moved inside. |
| 转折,同一句内 | although, even though | Although + 从句, 主句 | Although it rained, we played. |
| 转折,后接名词 | despite, in spite of | Despite + 名词, 从句 | Despite the rain, we played. |
| 转折,另起一句 | however | 句子。However, 句子。 | It rained. However, we played. |
| 转折,对等 | but, yet | 从句, but + 从句 | It rained, but we played. |
标点: 以 although 开头的从句放在前面时,后面加逗号;however 开头一个句子时,后面也加逗号。不要只用逗号连接两个完整的句子。
例题详解
合并这两个句子并表示转折:The bus was late. We reached school on time.
第一步,找出关系。 第二个事实出乎第一个事实的预期,所以关系是转折。
第二步,选句型。 两边各有一个从句,although 合适:Although + 从句, 主句。
第三步,造句。 Although the bus was late, we reached school on time.
第四步,检查只用了一个转折词。 句子里有 although,没有 but。
第五步,试第二个版本。 The bus was late, but we reached school on time. 两个都对。第一个更强调准时到达;第二个把两个事实看得同样重。
要留意的错误
常见的失误,是选了把原因和结果弄反的连接词。
错误句子: The road was wet, because the driver slowed down.
读者会以为是司机减速才使路面变湿。
改正: The driver slowed down because the road was wet. 问哪件事是原因。原因跟在 because 后面。如果想从路面讲起,就写:The road was wet, so the driver slowed down.
另一个失误是 despite 后面接完整从句:Despite it was raining 是错的。要用 Despite the rain 或 Although it was raining。
自我检测
先试做,再打开答案。
1. 选连接词:She practised every day, ___ she still felt nervous before the concert. (so / because / yet)
查看答案
yet。 第二个想法与预期相反。“so” 和 “because” 表示因果。
2. 改错:Despite he was tired, he finished the report.
查看答案
Despite being tired, he finished the report. 或 Although he was tired, he finished the report. despite 需要接名词或 -ing 形式。
3. 用因果关系合并:The match was cancelled. The field was flooded.
查看答案
The match was cancelled because the field was flooded. 另一个正确的写法:The field was flooded, so the match was cancelled.
下一步
接下来学习用情态动词区分确定与可能,它会增加你对每个连接有多大把握的表达。然后做语法综合练习题组。写作修订对比视图可以让你比较同一段落的两个版本,看哪个连接读起来更清楚。
当两个连接词在语法上都对、但其中一个更清楚时,老师也能帮你选,就像在英语(第二语言)线上一对一补习中那样。